Thesis Scientific Paper

Thesis Scientific Paper-41
A good strategy to determine if your thesis statement is too broad (and therefore, not arguable) is to ask yourself, "Would a scholar in my field disagree with this point?

Better: Roderick's (2009) theory of participatory leadership is particularly appropriate to nurse educators working within the emergency medicine field, where students benefit most from collegial and kinesthetic learning.We can also gather the field (business) and the topic (management and employee turnover).The statement is arguable because the student goes beyond merely comparing; he or she draws conclusions from that comparison ("can reduce the expenses associated with employee turnover").In the revised thesis, you can see the student make a specific, debatable claim that has the potential to generate several pages' worth of discussion.When drafting a thesis statement, think about the questions your thesis statement will generate: What follow-up inquiries might a reader have?The new revision here is still concise, as well as specific and arguable.We can see that it is specific because the writer is mentioning (a) concrete ideas and (b) exact authors.Notice in the revision that the field is now clear (ecology), and the language has been made much more field-specific ("conservation methods," "green organizations"), so the reader is able to see concretely the ideas the student is communicating.This sample thesis statement makes a claim, but it is not a claim that will sustain extended discussion.In the first example, there are almost no additional questions implied, but the revised example allows for a good deal more exploration.If you are having trouble getting started, try using the models below to generate a rough model of a thesis statement!

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